I just can add the same comment that Martin and Clarck said before... Good Ideas, but the guitars sound a bit too sharp and loud. Sometimes they are a little out of sync (or at least it feels a little like that, maybe cut them and timecorrect them, so they fit on every beat)
Panning would make this more interesting... all seems coming from the middle...
try to pan your guitars left and right and maybe the hihat too... so you get some more excitement into this ! Also the mix is a little bit short 2:30 min is really short...
a normal radioedit is 3:30min
try at least to get to 3:00min ;-)
Sounds pretty cool and the ideas are there, but I completely agree with Clarck on this one. With a little more tweaks I'm sure this would be pretty rockin'!
Pretty good idea's! Unfortunately the execution isn't good enough (for my standards). The beat is flat, sounds almost mono. A bit panning and some light compression maybe? The guitar is a bit too loud, giving the overall mix an unbalanced feel. Hihats are a bit too soft. The synth in the intro sounds LOUD, almost as loud as your entire mix bro...perhaps toning that down a bit would do the trick. All in all very very good idea, you've thought out your approach on this mix well. You really need to start focusing on the output/main mix, 3* from me...
I agree with Martin Harp, the synths are really good! Oh and I also disagree with him, I like the use of your vocals. =D The only thing that bothers me is the fact that your drums sound a little flat. Change that and I'll love your remix! =)
Good work man, 4/5
Remix Discussion
TweakerRay [FiXT] :
I just can add the same comment that Martin and Clarck said before... Good Ideas, but the guitars sound a bit too sharp and loud. Sometimes they are a little out of sync (or at least it feels a little like that, maybe cut them and timecorrect them, so they fit on every beat)Panning would make this more interesting... all seems coming from the middle...
try to pan your guitars left and right and maybe the hihat too... so you get some more excitement into this ! Also the mix is a little bit short 2:30 min is really short...
a normal radioedit is 3:30min
try at least to get to 3:00min ;-)
I would rate as a solid 3/5.
Cheers TweakerRay
2010-11-19 00:08:58 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Dreamy Banshee :
Hey! How did i miss that ? :D 5/52010-10-28 16:13:25 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Bullet of Reason :
Sounds pretty cool and the ideas are there, but I completely agree with Clarck on this one. With a little more tweaks I'm sure this would be pretty rockin'!2010-10-26 15:50:39 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Scorned Society :
I like the ideas, I pretty much second what Clarck has stated3/5
2010-10-25 08:56:39 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
AleXa :
I think you need to work a bit on your levels when you go from the synth to guitars...the rest sounds good...4/5Peace!
2010-10-23 07:45:29 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Clarck Cunt :
Pretty good idea's! Unfortunately the execution isn't good enough (for my standards). The beat is flat, sounds almost mono. A bit panning and some light compression maybe? The guitar is a bit too loud, giving the overall mix an unbalanced feel. Hihats are a bit too soft. The synth in the intro sounds LOUD, almost as loud as your entire mix bro...perhaps toning that down a bit would do the trick. All in all very very good idea, you've thought out your approach on this mix well. You really need to start focusing on the output/main mix, 3* from me...2010-10-22 17:18:48 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Neroese :
Thanks everyone for feedback!2010-10-22 15:53:08 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Meecrob :
I agree with Martin Harp, the synths are really good! Oh and I also disagree with him, I like the use of your vocals. =D The only thing that bothers me is the fact that your drums sound a little flat. Change that and I'll love your remix! =)Good work man, 4/5
Cheers,
Anthropanic
2010-10-18 22:31:51 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Martin Harp :
Fast. I like the synths but you should have used more of the vocals!2010-10-18 19:17:54 Flag Comment As Inappropriate