I absolutely love the tone and ballsiness of your synths. The supersaw is perfect. i like the concept to pitch shift the vocals, I just find that the first part sounds real odd when it goes down. The synth at 3:32 is really loud without drums with it, but when the drums do come in, it works. I just wish you had kept the idea going for longer. You looping in the listener then immediately changing concept, and it forces them to adjust to each new section.
I personally think that if you had expanded the original club-like idea into the majority of the song, and made it the backbone of which to branch your ideas, you would have an excellent track.
I give you a 3, because I love what you're doing on this, I just think it's much too fragmented (even for a remix). If you were able to get the ideas more composed into one track, rather than three or four ideas in one track, you would have a golden mix.
I really like some of the elements in this but it sounds like you have about 5 different remixes going on, which could work but they need to be transitioned a bit better.
4/5 for the ideas but i still think they would work better if the linking sections were done a bit smoother
You've got some really great things going on here. I'm especially liking the switchup at 3:30 - the different take on the texture and harmony is great. A bit repetitive for my taste, but that's the style.
Nice compositon, but i just think it lacks conclusion.
It is is very emotive but not very solid and well structured. Gave you a 4/5, and waiting for 3.0 like Greenox.
Cheers from Portugal!!
The intro is great, love the strings and piano in there! I'd like to hear the piano mixed in there more and louder, would compliment the tune well I reckon!
I have to agree with The Skylift upon the vocals between 2:06-2:16, not sure it suits the mix either.
Btw the piano that plays at 3:56 sounded a bit 'off' to me? :S
I think it may also be worth trying a deeper noted synth for the tune that kicks in @ 3:31 as a thought? Probably would have to change the build up to it also. Up to you of course, haha that's me being picky.
All in all solid mix! I also give it 4 stars but am looking forward to a further update if you submit one!
Much better man! I heard the first version hoping for a revision. Great introduction, that is why you deserve 4 stars. I submitted mine today, when it's up stop by for a listen :)
Us 19 year old students gotta stick together I guess.
Nice work, RyFridge! I love much the synths in this track, but one thing...almost all the remix is a calm melody. It would be sound great not as the mix of Eon but as an original song! Keep your creating, guy, and I give you 4/5, you really deserve!
Remix Discussion
Obviously Twins :
I absolutely love the tone and ballsiness of your synths. The supersaw is perfect. i like the concept to pitch shift the vocals, I just find that the first part sounds real odd when it goes down. The synth at 3:32 is really loud without drums with it, but when the drums do come in, it works. I just wish you had kept the idea going for longer. You looping in the listener then immediately changing concept, and it forces them to adjust to each new section.I personally think that if you had expanded the original club-like idea into the majority of the song, and made it the backbone of which to branch your ideas, you would have an excellent track.
I give you a 3, because I love what you're doing on this, I just think it's much too fragmented (even for a remix). If you were able to get the ideas more composed into one track, rather than three or four ideas in one track, you would have a golden mix.
-Nic
2010-04-07 13:15:54 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Anowrexiya :
I really like some of the elements in this but it sounds like you have about 5 different remixes going on, which could work but they need to be transitioned a bit better.4/5 for the ideas but i still think they would work better if the linking sections were done a bit smoother
2010-04-06 21:17:01 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
SGMX :
You've got some really great things going on here. I'm especially liking the switchup at 3:30 - the different take on the texture and harmony is great. A bit repetitive for my taste, but that's the style.2010-04-05 15:21:23 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
MrPayn :
Nice compositon, but i just think it lacks conclusion.It is is very emotive but not very solid and well structured. Gave you a 4/5, and waiting for 3.0 like Greenox.
Cheers from Portugal!!
2010-03-22 13:28:11 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Scorned Society :
Very original :), i agree with the comments below 100%Well made and good luck
I also entered a eon WIP and i'd appreciate some feedback :) thanks
2010-03-09 08:00:41 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
GReeNOX :
In your track too much all is added \many superfluous, I consider, that else over it you should work...I wait WIP 3))))
Good luck))) (4\5 stars))
2010-02-25 13:35:05 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
ChruschDIE! :
I love the instrumental work! strings and guitars fit perfect!Grüße und Respekt aus dem Süden!
2010-02-20 20:47:15 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
DJDarkStylz :
The only thing I have to say about it is that the beginning vox are kinda strange but other than that it is a great mix check mine out please :)2010-02-15 15:53:36 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Sync :
The intro is great, love the strings and piano in there! I'd like to hear the piano mixed in there more and louder, would compliment the tune well I reckon!I have to agree with The Skylift upon the vocals between 2:06-2:16, not sure it suits the mix either.
Btw the piano that plays at 3:56 sounded a bit 'off' to me? :S
I think it may also be worth trying a deeper noted synth for the tune that kicks in @ 3:31 as a thought? Probably would have to change the build up to it also. Up to you of course, haha that's me being picky.
All in all solid mix! I also give it 4 stars but am looking forward to a further update if you submit one!
All the best,
-Sync
2010-02-09 12:53:31 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Armored Defiance :
Much better man! I heard the first version hoping for a revision. Great introduction, that is why you deserve 4 stars. I submitted mine today, when it's up stop by for a listen :)Us 19 year old students gotta stick together I guess.
2010-02-08 20:34:19 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
Jason Martino :
Nice work, RyFridge! I love much the synths in this track, but one thing...almost all the remix is a calm melody. It would be sound great not as the mix of Eon but as an original song! Keep your creating, guy, and I give you 4/5, you really deserve!2010-02-08 19:53:35 Flag Comment As Inappropriate
The Skylift :
Much better than first version ;)But we thing that you should fix the vocal at 2:06-2:16, because it doesn't fit in our opinion.
We gave you 4 stars.
Regards, The Skylift.
2010-02-08 19:27:25 Flag Comment As Inappropriate